View Full Version : I Bled For You
bbychop
July 30th, 2005, 09:24 PM
I told you I loved you
You told me you loved me too
One big lie
I bled for you
I gave you my heart
You “gave†me yours too
A perfect illusion
I bled for you
I found out you lied
I found out I didn’t mean anything to you
I brought out my razor
And I bled for you.
*-tick tock-*
July 31st, 2005, 04:45 PM
this is amazing
i love it
excellent job :)
bbychop
July 31st, 2005, 05:51 PM
thank you. i haven't written anything since like last summer and i thought it wasn't that great but thank you.
Anonymous
July 31st, 2005, 08:01 PM
it was great! :D
bbychop
July 31st, 2005, 08:13 PM
thanks
-_-rise-against-_-
July 31st, 2005, 08:32 PM
yeh it was reallly good =)
*-tick tock-*
August 1st, 2005, 01:09 AM
i know what u mean.. i use to write poetry and corny stuff but now i cant do it like i use to :\
Anonymous
August 1st, 2005, 11:16 AM
i could never do this poetry thing! :P
6XxRazorBla6deKissesxX6
August 1st, 2005, 12:00 PM
it was awesome ash *hugs*
loopy_kinda_guys
August 3rd, 2005, 05:53 AM
thats really good. its so deep
-Silence
August 3rd, 2005, 07:14 AM
Wow, sorry I didn't read this sonner, it's amazing. :D
Just a question, are you going to keep writing?
bbychop
August 3rd, 2005, 12:52 PM
i probably will, just it might take a while to write anything..
-Silence
August 3rd, 2005, 01:01 PM
Good, I'm glad. :) Can't wait to see more.
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