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bbychop
July 30th, 2005, 09:24 PM
I told you I loved you
You told me you loved me too
One big lie
I bled for you

I gave you my heart
You “gave” me yours too
A perfect illusion
I bled for you

I found out you lied
I found out I didn’t mean anything to you
I brought out my razor
And I bled for you.

*-tick tock-*
July 31st, 2005, 04:45 PM
this is amazing
i love it

excellent job :)

bbychop
July 31st, 2005, 05:51 PM
thank you. i haven't written anything since like last summer and i thought it wasn't that great but thank you.

Anonymous
July 31st, 2005, 08:01 PM
it was great! :D

bbychop
July 31st, 2005, 08:13 PM
thanks

-_-rise-against-_-
July 31st, 2005, 08:32 PM
yeh it was reallly good =)

*-tick tock-*
August 1st, 2005, 01:09 AM
i know what u mean.. i use to write poetry and corny stuff but now i cant do it like i use to :\

Anonymous
August 1st, 2005, 11:16 AM
i could never do this poetry thing! :P

6XxRazorBla6deKissesxX6
August 1st, 2005, 12:00 PM
it was awesome ash *hugs*

loopy_kinda_guys
August 3rd, 2005, 05:53 AM
thats really good. its so deep

-Silence
August 3rd, 2005, 07:14 AM
Wow, sorry I didn't read this sonner, it's amazing. :D

Just a question, are you going to keep writing?

bbychop
August 3rd, 2005, 12:52 PM
i probably will, just it might take a while to write anything..

-Silence
August 3rd, 2005, 01:01 PM
Good, I'm glad. :) Can't wait to see more.