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Mob Boss
June 22nd, 2013, 12:44 PM
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Murky salt water seeped between every crack and crevice in the old floorboards
Slipped out the gap beneath the faded door
That now silently hides
The sadest of truths that fell from her eyes
Water taunted her pale body, as it lay completely submerged
While ribbons of raven hair shyly danced to be heard
Wide eyes whispered all her secrets
That her cold, blue lips would have regret
She'd always been merely a hollowed-out skeleton with shallow breath
Simply a detailed silhouette
Her heart didn't know a beat for many years
The day it did, she drowned in her own
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http://modernitychicchick.files.wordpress.com/2012/04/underwater2.jpg?w=870&h=870



















Thanks for anyone who reads.

Conqueror of Hearts
June 27th, 2013, 11:29 AM
Love it

Faolan
June 27th, 2013, 03:17 PM
It's really good! Took me a moment to get the blue lips.