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Mob Boss
June 13th, 2013, 10:24 PM
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Only your ears hear the soft voices
Tip-toeing down the hall
When the dark becomes a blanket of forces
Your eyes paint the decaying images on the wall
A look of horror sewn on your flawed face
Screams spilling from your lips
When phantoms in your mind become your reality
And reality but a short-lived trip
You no longer recognize the sweet nectar that is your own name
But I am the one who loved you when you went insane

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I literally wrote this poem just for the gif below it. I saw that gif and loved it, so this is what the gears in my brain went to work and created. Somewhat sloppy, but it took me less than 10 minutes to write so I'm satisfied with it. Thanks for reading any and everyone.

Miserabilia
June 13th, 2013, 11:57 PM
I like that gif too! The poem reminds me of schizofrenics. is that what is was about?

Mob Boss
June 14th, 2013, 12:24 AM
I like that gif too! The poem reminds me of schizofrenics. is that what is was about?

Yeah, something along those lines. Thanks for reading. :)

Abyssal Echo
June 14th, 2013, 12:37 AM
I like it :D Its well written it brings out the Schizoaffective side of my Bi-Polar :P

Mob Boss
June 14th, 2013, 12:50 AM
AWWWWWWWW, YAY! :D Uh-oh, my bad. XD

CharlieHorse
June 14th, 2013, 12:51 AM
Neat :)
Should be published :)

Mob Boss
June 14th, 2013, 12:24 PM
Danke, charliebean.

Horatio Nelson
June 14th, 2013, 12:28 PM
Scary. O_o

I love how your literature is so descriptive, really immersive.

Mob Boss
June 14th, 2013, 01:46 PM
Scary. O_o

I love how your literature is so descriptive, really immersive.

Thank you so much. :) My imagination has always been extremely descriptive, which can screw up my poetry sometimes if I let myself get lost in descriptions. Thanks for reading. :)

Miserabilia
June 14th, 2013, 05:22 PM
Thank you so much. :) My imagination has always been extremely descriptive, which can screw up my poetry sometimes if I let myself get lost in descriptions. Thanks for reading. :)

hey new profile pic! :) cool