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Anonymous
July 25th, 2005, 01:35 AM
The Promise

Another day passed,
Only one fact remains,
My eyes will never see again,
The beauty of mornings light,

I can’t help but remember,
How I got here,
How I found this pain,
I never should have seen,

How you manipulated me,
Made me believe,
I deserved,
Only the worst,

How you called yourself,
“Friend,” “Father,” “Mother,”
Any title you had,
Did not deserve,

In the end,
I get what I deserve,
The pain I could not commit,
Without the blade,

So here I am,
Knife in hand,
Shacking in fear,
And anticipation,

Don’t worry though,
I promised not to,
It's not suicide,
You killed me.



-Ekia

Anonymous
July 25th, 2005, 09:22 AM
whats wrong?
Anywayz, that poem was really great! :D

Anonymous
July 27th, 2005, 11:31 PM
Everything and nothing at the same time.

-_-rise-against-_-
July 30th, 2005, 03:04 PM
that was really good and deep.

Ezz
August 2nd, 2005, 10:55 AM
i have the same opinions here too

but anyways, i just new to this section