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Mob Boss
May 19th, 2013, 11:10 PM
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Horatio Nelson
May 19th, 2013, 11:33 PM
Whew, that was dark. But great writing overall, keep it up. :)

Mob Boss
May 19th, 2013, 11:42 PM
Whew, that was dark. But great writing overall, keep it up. :)

Yeah, sorry about that. :P I can nearly only write sad, dark truth. Thanks for the compliment! :)

jayyy-lmao
May 20th, 2013, 01:11 AM
That's amazing! I like the darkness, I'm a bit like that too. XD

Mob Boss
May 20th, 2013, 01:17 AM
That's amazing! I like the darkness, I'm a bit like that too. XD

Awww, thank you so much! Yeah, nearly all of my writing is dark and twisted, with the exception of one I wrote about Winter - but even that one involves murder as a metaphor. Sorry for all the gloom. :P

jayyy-lmao
May 20th, 2013, 01:24 AM
Awww, thank you so much! Yeah, nearly all of my writing is dark and twisted, with the exception of one I wrote about Winter - but even that one involves murder as a metaphor. Sorry for all the gloom. :P

I find the gloom keeps me, as a person, happier. But all sadness into writing.

Mob Boss
May 20th, 2013, 02:35 AM
I find the gloom keeps me, as a person, happier. But all sadness into writing.

I couldn't agree more. :)

Faolan
May 26th, 2013, 10:46 PM
You're an amazing writer! Your use of sensory imagery throughout, and other figurative language, makes this piece come to life. Don't stop writing!

Luke257
May 27th, 2013, 12:01 PM
Very Powerful writing, makes me think so that's very good.

Mob Boss
May 27th, 2013, 07:10 PM
You're an amazing writer! Your use of sensory imagery throughout, and other figurative language, makes this piece come to life. Don't stop writing!
Thank you so much! :) You just made my day.
Very Powerful writing, makes me think so that's very good.

Thank you. :]

Stronk Serb
May 28th, 2013, 01:31 AM
Nice, although not my style.

Emerald Dream
May 28th, 2013, 07:09 AM
Locked at OP request. :locked: