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Jabbawocke
April 30th, 2013, 12:45 PM
For Cyana.

The woman wiped the knife with the man's shirt. A gaping hole in the side of his head throbbed as scarlet drops dripped out.
It was a messy job, and unusually clumsy for the female assasin, but it would have to do.
The assasin grabbed her black leather bag, and swept the room a last time for any prints she might've left behind. She knew she hadn't left any, but
in her line of business, it was better safe than sorry.
Satisfied with what she saw, she left the room, her beretta 9mm in her right hand, and her bag in her right. She had to work quick, her window of opportunity was only a few minutes long.
Striding across the long hallway, she stopped in front of a door and carefully set down her bag, tucking her pistol into her shoulder holster. She unzipped the bag and pulled out several bags of plastic c4, and placing them at the base of the door. Attached to the c4 was a remote detonator, which she could activate with her wrist watch.
Her job done, she carefully stepped back a few feet, pulled out her Beretta, then shot the whole magazine into the door. She was rewarded with a grunt and someone hitting the floor with a thud.
Quickly, she jumped out of a window, grabbing a rope that was anchored to a Ah-6 little bird helicopter. She pressed her wrist watch button twice, and watched as the mansion was engulfed in flames.

Rina
May 1st, 2013, 08:21 PM
I liked it! Definitely seems like it would be a good story if you were to ever expand on it! xD

Jabbawocke
May 3rd, 2013, 06:51 AM
I liked it! Definitely seems like it would be a good story if you were to ever expand on it! xD

Ahahah thanks xD I probably wouldn't though since im too lazy :P

chezhans
May 5th, 2013, 04:55 AM
(suspensful music)...Welcome...or as Alfred Hitchcock might say..."good eveenninng"