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November 30th, 2007, 10:24 PM
I got the song title from the song perfect insanity by disturbed. I understand that this is all over the place, and thats why I posted it.
Constructive Criticism, anyone?
Ever since Jenna was a little girl, she wanted a perfect life. She wanted to be a house wife, with two children, a boy and a girl. She wanted a beautiful cottage nestedled close to the ocean with a quaint little garden in front, and a wealthy husband who loved and cared for her very much.
When Jenna got older, she joined a country club, and for months she sat around in her pretty sun dress and waited for her own prince charming to arrive.
Soon enough, she met a man, named John, who swept her off her feet and had ever-growing undying love for each other. After a 10 fun filled months of loving each other, he popped the question, on a dream cruise to bermuda. Thrilled, Jenna said accepted, dreaming about her future years with him together, ready to spend the rest of their lives together.
Just like she dreamed about, she got a beautiful cottage with a garden in front of the ocean, two beautiful children, Kelly and Tommy. And, the man she loved, John who lived together in their house as one happy family.
Now, 20 years later, on Jenna's Birthday, she is sitting at her spotless kitchen table, staring outside at the crashing waves of the ocean. But at the house, its not the same. Minutes later, her daughter, Kely comes down the stairs, looking very sick, and the buttons on her shirt ready to pop off. Then Tommy comes down, dark, bloodshot eyes, and awfully pale. But Jenna is still gazing out at the ocean, her mind blocked from the outside world. But where is John? Could it be that he died in a fatal car crash last night, from drunk driving? Could it be that Kelly is pregnant 9 months from living at a whore house? Could it be that Tommy is a heroin addict, striving for more each and every day?
But still, Jenna sits there, looking out her cracked and moulding window, living alone, in her perfect insanity.
Constructive Criticism, anyone?
Ever since Jenna was a little girl, she wanted a perfect life. She wanted to be a house wife, with two children, a boy and a girl. She wanted a beautiful cottage nestedled close to the ocean with a quaint little garden in front, and a wealthy husband who loved and cared for her very much.
When Jenna got older, she joined a country club, and for months she sat around in her pretty sun dress and waited for her own prince charming to arrive.
Soon enough, she met a man, named John, who swept her off her feet and had ever-growing undying love for each other. After a 10 fun filled months of loving each other, he popped the question, on a dream cruise to bermuda. Thrilled, Jenna said accepted, dreaming about her future years with him together, ready to spend the rest of their lives together.
Just like she dreamed about, she got a beautiful cottage with a garden in front of the ocean, two beautiful children, Kelly and Tommy. And, the man she loved, John who lived together in their house as one happy family.
Now, 20 years later, on Jenna's Birthday, she is sitting at her spotless kitchen table, staring outside at the crashing waves of the ocean. But at the house, its not the same. Minutes later, her daughter, Kely comes down the stairs, looking very sick, and the buttons on her shirt ready to pop off. Then Tommy comes down, dark, bloodshot eyes, and awfully pale. But Jenna is still gazing out at the ocean, her mind blocked from the outside world. But where is John? Could it be that he died in a fatal car crash last night, from drunk driving? Could it be that Kelly is pregnant 9 months from living at a whore house? Could it be that Tommy is a heroin addict, striving for more each and every day?
But still, Jenna sits there, looking out her cracked and moulding window, living alone, in her perfect insanity.