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Mannequin
November 24th, 2007, 10:15 PM
Painted fingers
press on nails
bleeding fingers
tell tall tales.

Rhyming chirps
of crying birds;
twisted beaks
cry soft words.

Tunneling filter
of malignant truth
this twirling spiral
is ending our youth.

Winter season
come to pass
we're still here
the mediocre mass.

Bobby
November 24th, 2007, 11:54 PM
I like it very much. The only thing I don't really get is the last line.

Sugaree
November 26th, 2007, 05:23 PM
It sounds like something to do with relgion.

is that it? Cause that's the only mass I know or it could be refering to an unstable crowd

western ninja
December 8th, 2007, 01:59 PM
I think he's talking about the human race as a group?