Hunter_Steel
April 6th, 2013, 07:13 PM
Okay, so I had an inspiration watching many Animes, and many Scifi shows. So I wrote this, planning on making an entire book out of it.
Star Destiny
By Erich Julius du Plessis
Phase 1
Uneven Odds
The war between Humanity and the Eztec Empire has been raging for nearly 330 thousand years. The war started out when the Humans began deep space exploration of the nearby systems. Using the new trans-dimensional gate ways, a trip that would last 40 years would last only 4 hours to 1 week. Humans met a new alien race calling themselves the Eztec Empire. But they attacked the Humans because they feared the demonic energy, alchemic powers, and magical powers that the humans possessed.
The Empress ordered the extermination of the Human Race. With their vast technology and numbers the Empire thought the inferior humans would be exterminated in a matter of months. But the magic, alchemy and demonic energy that the Humans possessed proved to be more powerful than they thought. Large 4 kilometer long battleships could be summoned through demonic gateways and materialized with the use of Magical properties in a matter of hours. Before long the humans had nearly 3 million battleships that could destroy whole stars. One such battleship known as the Huntress took around 4 years to materialize. She is the most advanced in the fleet. Although 330 thousand years old, it can learn, adapt and evolve itself.
Starting out as a 330 meter destroyer, over the last few thousand years it became nearly 10 kilometers in length and now has a crew of 440 thousand men. And nearly can carry nearly 20 thousand Battlesuits. With 5 PALADIN assault units in it. The commanding officer of this ship is Fleet Admiral Hunter Steel, a 30 thousand year old Demon/Vampire/Alchemist, having the ability to summon the power of the underworld to end whole battles in almost hours. 330 thousand years have passed since the start of the war. The Earth Sphere Empire and Eztec Empire are at a stalemate, with the Andromeda sector in the middle of the two Empires. Whomever takes this sector turns the tide of the war.
The Huntress and her fleet of 4 thousand battleships and cruisers are stuck at planet Chisos in the Omega quadrant. They are being chased by an Eztec extermination fleet. The Huntress had sustained heavy damage all over while escaping.
“Admiral, repairs to the Huntress are going smoothly. The Blackhole Reactor has been repaired, and singularities have stopped appearing in the Reactor Room. Weapons systems should be back online. And the Pheonix PALADIN should be ready for a sortie in about 2 hours.” Says Vice Admiral Klueze.
The uncertainty in his face giving away that there’s bad news about Admiral Hunter’s PALADIN.
“I know there’s something that’s not right with my Paladin. If you don’t tell me, I will take the thoughts from your mind.” Says Admiral Hunter tapping his forehead.
“Okay, your Paladin sustained a leak in its Black Hole Generator, and the Engineering team is having a hard time navigating through the Singularities around there.”
“I’ll go give a hand. I built the reactor for that, I guess I know how to setup a protective field around it to prevent the singularities from warping the whole place.” As he said that he got up and opened a path down to Hangar bay 1 reserved specifically for the Phoenix.
“Stand back. I’ll contain the Singularities so that you can patch up the generator.”
He said something in a demonic language, and hit the ground. Immediately the mini blackholes around the Paladin’s reactor disappeared long enough for the Engineering team to shut it down and remove it to repair the reactor.
“Thank you, sir. We would not have been able to repair it with the singularities around it.” Said one of the engineers.
“It is not a problem. Remember, that will only work for as long as the reactor is not active. If its active and the damages have not been repaired, the singularities will reappear.” Warned Admiral Hunter. He went back to his cabin after saying that to read through the rest of the reports.
3 weeks go by, and the ship is nearly ready for another long distance jump. As the trans-dimensional gateways don’t seem to open due to an error in the sequence of opening one. The Huntress was developed with a jumpdrive that became more advanced than the conventional gateway sequencer. The only problem is the Jumpdrive takes a lot of energy to power it. So the Huntress can only risk one long jump. But after that, the powercore for the Jumpdrive is depleted and it takes 3 days to charge if the Huntress doesn’t drain the energy of a nearby Singularity. The distance to jump is between the Omega quadrant and the Omicron Sector. A jump that will last 3 days over a distance of 3 lightyears.
“Gravitational Distortions on long range scanners!”
“Find out who it is, ready the fleet for combat!”
“Its at Mark 82, 3 Charlie 4, these signatures are from the Eztec fleet that’s been tailing us!”
“All ships, prepare for long range bombardment! Launch all battlesuits in formation E34.”
The fleet opens all gun ports and launches their Battlesuits in the formation for the absolute line of defense.
“On my mark. Charge the Black Hole Cannon. Fire!”
The fleet opens fire with the forward guns of the battleships. The Huntress’ Black Hole Cannon makes quick work of 35 battleships. With the Eztec fleet launching a counterattack. An all out clash of the titans takes place between the two behemoth forces.
“I’m going out in the Phoenix. Saber you have control of the ship. Tell the Klueze team to make use of the heavy armaments. I need those Photon Torpedoes to kill off the incoming enemy squadrons so me and the rest of the Phantoms can launch to end this quickly.”
“How did you know there’s incoming enemy units? I guess its because your part demon. Allow the use of Heavy armaments to the Klueze team!”
“The Phoenix is being transferred to the catapult deck. The Phoenix with use the Phoenix Fire assault pack, catapult teams stand by. Phoenix is in position. Catapult voltage rising to 240, 350, 440,550. Phoenix has entered the magnetic field. Transferring launch time to Phoenix.”
“Roger that, Hunter Steel, Phoenix, launching!”
The PALADIN races down the catapult into the battle. The rest of the Phantoms launch from their respective hangars around the ship to rendezvous with the Phoenix. The 5 PALADINS are the Phoenix, Griffin, Hippogriff, Hydra, and Dragon. Each of these 5 Paladins has the ability to destroy a whole planet single handedly. Phoenix is known for its Phoenix Fire ability. When activated, four wings of fire and 3 tails of fire protrude from the Phoenix. This system is used only as a last measure to end a battle quickly. Griffin comes with the Griffin Assault Pack. The Griffin mounts two Singularity Cannons. It uses its system to assault an enemy dreadnought and destroy it in one shot. Hippogriff is meant for close quarters combat (CQB) its ability to wield 2 swords makes it excellent for CQB. Hydra has a modular transformation that gives it the appearance of a 3 headed Hydra. When the heads open their mouths; it reveals 3 Thermal Nuclear Beam Cannons. Lastly is Dragon. It shoots out beams from its mouth when in Dragon Mode that resembles fire. Where in fact its beams of Plasma super heated to 20 thousand degrees Celsius. But it has the power to disrupt the movement of a Planet’s core to destroy it if necessary.
Five Divine works of art in the eyes of the Earth Empire, demons in the eyes of the Eztec Empire. So far only 5 were made due to the fact that there can only be 5 made. Technology and resources limited it to the number of 5. And all 5 were given to Admiral Hunter and the Phantoms.
“Here they come!”
“All units; break!”
“Hell yeah! Let’s show them why we’re called the Phantoms! Hydra, let’s do this!”
Meanwhile on the Eztec side.
“Sir, we’ve identified the launch of the 5 PALADIN units.”
“No! Prepare the Prejudice for launch! Those units will finally know my pain.”
Says Commander Bajra as he walks off to prepare his unit for battle.
The Prejudice steps onto the catapult deck. Standing at nearly 30 meters tall. It is twice the height of most Battlesuits ever created.
“Prejudice, ready for launch. Transferring launch timing over to the Prejudice.”
“Roger that, Bajra Dresetro, Prejudice, heading out to crush our enemies!” The Prejudice races down the catapult and into the battle.
“Sir, we’ve picked up an unidentified Battlesuit. Its power and size are off the charts!”
“I’m seeing it now. This one’s mine, the rest of you take care of the rest! Phoenix Fire, full burst mode!” 4 wings of fire accompanied by 3 tails grow out of the Phoenix. Charging into the Prejudice, the Phoenix fires off its beam rifle, which the Prejudice dodges only to return fire with its beam cannons.
Admiral Hunter and Commander Bajra begin their duel, for the past 100 years their duels were always interrupted. This time they find the perfect time for their duel to be ended properly.
“Admiral Hunter’s unit is engaged in combat with the Enemy’s PALADIN unit! Its that one that’s been fighting us for the past 100 years!”
“Best not disturb him, aim for the mother ship, this time that accursed ship goes down! Alchemist Cannon Fire!” Said Vice Admiral Saber Mira Storm. Saber is also in a relationship with Admiral Hunter. It’s been a difficult 20 years but one would think that two Demons wouldn’t have problems. The only problem they face is the fact that Hunter surpasses an A rank Demon. The most powerful Demons in the world. While she’s an S rank demon, she still has yet to realize her powers and Hunter has been helping her do just that.
“Destro, you block my path yet again?! When will you realize this is futile?! You’ll never beat me the way you are now!!” Exclaimed Hunter, aiming he’s beam rifle at the cockpit of Destro Videra Moistra’s PALADIN unit.
“I’ll beat you when you realize that the Earth Empire is corrupt and evil! I still hold onto you’re teachings, master, but you’re insight of the Eztec Empire is incorrect! When will you realize this?!” Retaliated Destro, blocking the shot and taking a swipe at Hunter’s cockpit, only to be dodged and kicked back.
“You’re mistaken, I never taught you to be so full of selfishness! The teachings I gave you were to use you’re demonic powers to defend the human race and the Earth Empire! You’ve gone far from what I taught you, don’t insult me by saying you still hold dear to my teachings when all you’ve done is twist them to fit your own ego!!” shouted an infuriated Hunter, kicking Destro’s PALADIN on the cockpit hatch then shooting the arm off. “You’re 1,000 years too early to take me on. The day you realize that the Eztec Empire is wrong for wanting to destroy the human race for accidentally stumbling into their territory because of a galactic collision; will be the day you will be able to match me in combat.” He said turning around and heading into the battle.
“Master, you haven’t changed one bit in these last 100 years. I will get stronger, then I shall defeat you.” Said Destro, using he’s emergency thrusters to get back to the mother ship, Hunter’s kick to the cockpit and shooting the right arm off, made many major systems malfunction.
“Admiral Hunter defeated the enemy PALADIN and is moving up above the middle of the battle field!” shouted one of the bridge officers. Saber immediately knew what he was going to do.
“Patch me through to Hunter’s PALADIN, I need to stop him!”
“Yes ma’am.”
The screen flickers on showing flashes as the explosions can be seen from the cockpit screens in Hunter’s cockpit. “Hunter you have to stop, everytime you use that you use decrease you’re lifespan!”
“Sorry, Saber. But I’m going to finish this before we lose anymore good men to this meaningless battle. When I perform the attack, I want all the ships in the fleet with forward guns including the Huntress to fire at the enemy mother ships. Tell all our Battlesuits to retreat.”
“Yes sir. Order all Battlesuits to retreat back to the fleet and all ships with forward guns to pick an enemy ship to shoot at and charge forward guns.” Ordered Saber, her right eye beginning to flow with tears.
“All PALADINs, form on me, we’re going to perform the Armageddon Affect!” ordered Hunter, to he’s team.
“Oh, Commander, it’s been a while since we performed the Armageddon Affect. What’s the occasion?”
“We’re finishing this battle now before we receive unneeded casualties! Everyone, get in position!” He said, positioning himself at the head of the 5 pointed pentagram they were forming. “Everyone in position?” inquired Hunter.
“Ready when you are.” They said in unison. Each PALADIN unit raising their right arms, the pentagram gets drawn and circles within the 5 star points appear with words written in an ancient earth language long since forgotten.
“Epídrasi̱ Armageddó̱na!”
Thats all I have so far. But tell me what you guys think.
~Hunter
Star Destiny
By Erich Julius du Plessis
Phase 1
Uneven Odds
The war between Humanity and the Eztec Empire has been raging for nearly 330 thousand years. The war started out when the Humans began deep space exploration of the nearby systems. Using the new trans-dimensional gate ways, a trip that would last 40 years would last only 4 hours to 1 week. Humans met a new alien race calling themselves the Eztec Empire. But they attacked the Humans because they feared the demonic energy, alchemic powers, and magical powers that the humans possessed.
The Empress ordered the extermination of the Human Race. With their vast technology and numbers the Empire thought the inferior humans would be exterminated in a matter of months. But the magic, alchemy and demonic energy that the Humans possessed proved to be more powerful than they thought. Large 4 kilometer long battleships could be summoned through demonic gateways and materialized with the use of Magical properties in a matter of hours. Before long the humans had nearly 3 million battleships that could destroy whole stars. One such battleship known as the Huntress took around 4 years to materialize. She is the most advanced in the fleet. Although 330 thousand years old, it can learn, adapt and evolve itself.
Starting out as a 330 meter destroyer, over the last few thousand years it became nearly 10 kilometers in length and now has a crew of 440 thousand men. And nearly can carry nearly 20 thousand Battlesuits. With 5 PALADIN assault units in it. The commanding officer of this ship is Fleet Admiral Hunter Steel, a 30 thousand year old Demon/Vampire/Alchemist, having the ability to summon the power of the underworld to end whole battles in almost hours. 330 thousand years have passed since the start of the war. The Earth Sphere Empire and Eztec Empire are at a stalemate, with the Andromeda sector in the middle of the two Empires. Whomever takes this sector turns the tide of the war.
The Huntress and her fleet of 4 thousand battleships and cruisers are stuck at planet Chisos in the Omega quadrant. They are being chased by an Eztec extermination fleet. The Huntress had sustained heavy damage all over while escaping.
“Admiral, repairs to the Huntress are going smoothly. The Blackhole Reactor has been repaired, and singularities have stopped appearing in the Reactor Room. Weapons systems should be back online. And the Pheonix PALADIN should be ready for a sortie in about 2 hours.” Says Vice Admiral Klueze.
The uncertainty in his face giving away that there’s bad news about Admiral Hunter’s PALADIN.
“I know there’s something that’s not right with my Paladin. If you don’t tell me, I will take the thoughts from your mind.” Says Admiral Hunter tapping his forehead.
“Okay, your Paladin sustained a leak in its Black Hole Generator, and the Engineering team is having a hard time navigating through the Singularities around there.”
“I’ll go give a hand. I built the reactor for that, I guess I know how to setup a protective field around it to prevent the singularities from warping the whole place.” As he said that he got up and opened a path down to Hangar bay 1 reserved specifically for the Phoenix.
“Stand back. I’ll contain the Singularities so that you can patch up the generator.”
He said something in a demonic language, and hit the ground. Immediately the mini blackholes around the Paladin’s reactor disappeared long enough for the Engineering team to shut it down and remove it to repair the reactor.
“Thank you, sir. We would not have been able to repair it with the singularities around it.” Said one of the engineers.
“It is not a problem. Remember, that will only work for as long as the reactor is not active. If its active and the damages have not been repaired, the singularities will reappear.” Warned Admiral Hunter. He went back to his cabin after saying that to read through the rest of the reports.
3 weeks go by, and the ship is nearly ready for another long distance jump. As the trans-dimensional gateways don’t seem to open due to an error in the sequence of opening one. The Huntress was developed with a jumpdrive that became more advanced than the conventional gateway sequencer. The only problem is the Jumpdrive takes a lot of energy to power it. So the Huntress can only risk one long jump. But after that, the powercore for the Jumpdrive is depleted and it takes 3 days to charge if the Huntress doesn’t drain the energy of a nearby Singularity. The distance to jump is between the Omega quadrant and the Omicron Sector. A jump that will last 3 days over a distance of 3 lightyears.
“Gravitational Distortions on long range scanners!”
“Find out who it is, ready the fleet for combat!”
“Its at Mark 82, 3 Charlie 4, these signatures are from the Eztec fleet that’s been tailing us!”
“All ships, prepare for long range bombardment! Launch all battlesuits in formation E34.”
The fleet opens all gun ports and launches their Battlesuits in the formation for the absolute line of defense.
“On my mark. Charge the Black Hole Cannon. Fire!”
The fleet opens fire with the forward guns of the battleships. The Huntress’ Black Hole Cannon makes quick work of 35 battleships. With the Eztec fleet launching a counterattack. An all out clash of the titans takes place between the two behemoth forces.
“I’m going out in the Phoenix. Saber you have control of the ship. Tell the Klueze team to make use of the heavy armaments. I need those Photon Torpedoes to kill off the incoming enemy squadrons so me and the rest of the Phantoms can launch to end this quickly.”
“How did you know there’s incoming enemy units? I guess its because your part demon. Allow the use of Heavy armaments to the Klueze team!”
“The Phoenix is being transferred to the catapult deck. The Phoenix with use the Phoenix Fire assault pack, catapult teams stand by. Phoenix is in position. Catapult voltage rising to 240, 350, 440,550. Phoenix has entered the magnetic field. Transferring launch time to Phoenix.”
“Roger that, Hunter Steel, Phoenix, launching!”
The PALADIN races down the catapult into the battle. The rest of the Phantoms launch from their respective hangars around the ship to rendezvous with the Phoenix. The 5 PALADINS are the Phoenix, Griffin, Hippogriff, Hydra, and Dragon. Each of these 5 Paladins has the ability to destroy a whole planet single handedly. Phoenix is known for its Phoenix Fire ability. When activated, four wings of fire and 3 tails of fire protrude from the Phoenix. This system is used only as a last measure to end a battle quickly. Griffin comes with the Griffin Assault Pack. The Griffin mounts two Singularity Cannons. It uses its system to assault an enemy dreadnought and destroy it in one shot. Hippogriff is meant for close quarters combat (CQB) its ability to wield 2 swords makes it excellent for CQB. Hydra has a modular transformation that gives it the appearance of a 3 headed Hydra. When the heads open their mouths; it reveals 3 Thermal Nuclear Beam Cannons. Lastly is Dragon. It shoots out beams from its mouth when in Dragon Mode that resembles fire. Where in fact its beams of Plasma super heated to 20 thousand degrees Celsius. But it has the power to disrupt the movement of a Planet’s core to destroy it if necessary.
Five Divine works of art in the eyes of the Earth Empire, demons in the eyes of the Eztec Empire. So far only 5 were made due to the fact that there can only be 5 made. Technology and resources limited it to the number of 5. And all 5 were given to Admiral Hunter and the Phantoms.
“Here they come!”
“All units; break!”
“Hell yeah! Let’s show them why we’re called the Phantoms! Hydra, let’s do this!”
Meanwhile on the Eztec side.
“Sir, we’ve identified the launch of the 5 PALADIN units.”
“No! Prepare the Prejudice for launch! Those units will finally know my pain.”
Says Commander Bajra as he walks off to prepare his unit for battle.
The Prejudice steps onto the catapult deck. Standing at nearly 30 meters tall. It is twice the height of most Battlesuits ever created.
“Prejudice, ready for launch. Transferring launch timing over to the Prejudice.”
“Roger that, Bajra Dresetro, Prejudice, heading out to crush our enemies!” The Prejudice races down the catapult and into the battle.
“Sir, we’ve picked up an unidentified Battlesuit. Its power and size are off the charts!”
“I’m seeing it now. This one’s mine, the rest of you take care of the rest! Phoenix Fire, full burst mode!” 4 wings of fire accompanied by 3 tails grow out of the Phoenix. Charging into the Prejudice, the Phoenix fires off its beam rifle, which the Prejudice dodges only to return fire with its beam cannons.
Admiral Hunter and Commander Bajra begin their duel, for the past 100 years their duels were always interrupted. This time they find the perfect time for their duel to be ended properly.
“Admiral Hunter’s unit is engaged in combat with the Enemy’s PALADIN unit! Its that one that’s been fighting us for the past 100 years!”
“Best not disturb him, aim for the mother ship, this time that accursed ship goes down! Alchemist Cannon Fire!” Said Vice Admiral Saber Mira Storm. Saber is also in a relationship with Admiral Hunter. It’s been a difficult 20 years but one would think that two Demons wouldn’t have problems. The only problem they face is the fact that Hunter surpasses an A rank Demon. The most powerful Demons in the world. While she’s an S rank demon, she still has yet to realize her powers and Hunter has been helping her do just that.
“Destro, you block my path yet again?! When will you realize this is futile?! You’ll never beat me the way you are now!!” Exclaimed Hunter, aiming he’s beam rifle at the cockpit of Destro Videra Moistra’s PALADIN unit.
“I’ll beat you when you realize that the Earth Empire is corrupt and evil! I still hold onto you’re teachings, master, but you’re insight of the Eztec Empire is incorrect! When will you realize this?!” Retaliated Destro, blocking the shot and taking a swipe at Hunter’s cockpit, only to be dodged and kicked back.
“You’re mistaken, I never taught you to be so full of selfishness! The teachings I gave you were to use you’re demonic powers to defend the human race and the Earth Empire! You’ve gone far from what I taught you, don’t insult me by saying you still hold dear to my teachings when all you’ve done is twist them to fit your own ego!!” shouted an infuriated Hunter, kicking Destro’s PALADIN on the cockpit hatch then shooting the arm off. “You’re 1,000 years too early to take me on. The day you realize that the Eztec Empire is wrong for wanting to destroy the human race for accidentally stumbling into their territory because of a galactic collision; will be the day you will be able to match me in combat.” He said turning around and heading into the battle.
“Master, you haven’t changed one bit in these last 100 years. I will get stronger, then I shall defeat you.” Said Destro, using he’s emergency thrusters to get back to the mother ship, Hunter’s kick to the cockpit and shooting the right arm off, made many major systems malfunction.
“Admiral Hunter defeated the enemy PALADIN and is moving up above the middle of the battle field!” shouted one of the bridge officers. Saber immediately knew what he was going to do.
“Patch me through to Hunter’s PALADIN, I need to stop him!”
“Yes ma’am.”
The screen flickers on showing flashes as the explosions can be seen from the cockpit screens in Hunter’s cockpit. “Hunter you have to stop, everytime you use that you use decrease you’re lifespan!”
“Sorry, Saber. But I’m going to finish this before we lose anymore good men to this meaningless battle. When I perform the attack, I want all the ships in the fleet with forward guns including the Huntress to fire at the enemy mother ships. Tell all our Battlesuits to retreat.”
“Yes sir. Order all Battlesuits to retreat back to the fleet and all ships with forward guns to pick an enemy ship to shoot at and charge forward guns.” Ordered Saber, her right eye beginning to flow with tears.
“All PALADINs, form on me, we’re going to perform the Armageddon Affect!” ordered Hunter, to he’s team.
“Oh, Commander, it’s been a while since we performed the Armageddon Affect. What’s the occasion?”
“We’re finishing this battle now before we receive unneeded casualties! Everyone, get in position!” He said, positioning himself at the head of the 5 pointed pentagram they were forming. “Everyone in position?” inquired Hunter.
“Ready when you are.” They said in unison. Each PALADIN unit raising their right arms, the pentagram gets drawn and circles within the 5 star points appear with words written in an ancient earth language long since forgotten.
“Epídrasi̱ Armageddó̱na!”
Thats all I have so far. But tell me what you guys think.
~Hunter