no care.

[Mannequin]

It's a great day
for feast and glee;
alligned down rows and tables
sits my entire family tree.

Pseudo grins and obnoxious laughter
no real words are really exchanged;
the only sounds filling the air
is the same old stories disarranged.

While mindless chatter is brought about
and i crawl back into my hollow frame;
i just look around and see unfimiliar faces
they look different yet they are all the same.

With a glance at my empty plate--of course
i secretly threw the food away;
Thank you god for my dear family
I love thanksgiving day.

;)

[Bobby]

Wow, this is really good Austin. Great job.

[Patchy]

WOW I love it 10/10 for effort and creativity

[Serenity]

I like it- lol it's just like one that I'm in the middle of writing now. I have 2 criticisms: your meter isn't constant, so it's pretty choppy, and "the only sounds filling the air/ is the same old stories disarranged" should be "the only sounds filling the air/ are the same old stories disarranged"

[Sugaree]

I think that line was perfect as it was. But that grammer error was the one that made it choppy


Other than that 10/10:D!

[western ninja]

very good =]