My first poem!

[Youmadbro]

So I just decided to write this now... What do you think?

In the faint of night,
My glorious fight
Has been lost
I don't know why
I can't just die
Or forget it all...

All this pain,
Falling like rain
Down my face,
With such grace
But the feelings inside
Where my thoughts abide
Cause great hail to fall

If I believed everything I saw,
I'd be considered crazy to all
I don't know why
But I see you and cry
It's your fault I'm this way
Please go, I don't want you to stay

I feel terrible every day
I just want to die, always
But I cannot die,
No matter how hard I try
No matter the pills I take,
The nooses I make
Or the knives I sharpen,
My skin has hardened
To my tries of suicide

Everyday I just wait for salvation,
In this time of tribulation
My heart is sick and sad
My mind is burning mad,
My body cannot take it anymore
And down I fall... To the floor

I cannot wait for salvation anymore
I just want to die,
I don't want to cry
I just want to be gone,
From the pain and lies

[jayyy-lmao]

Amazing. It is really good when people convey their feelings in their poetry. We're here for you bro.