Swim

[Shadow]

I dive in the water
It feels great and
I feel free
The water is cool
And calm I resurface
And begin
To swim to the end
5 minutes later I reach
The end
I turn around and swim back
The end is in sight
I reach it and rejoice

[rocketsheep]

ffff

[Texas warrior]

It has a bad rhyming scheam, little to no meaning. It is just not that good.

[Shadow]

It has a bad rhyming scheam, little to no meaning. It is just not that good.

It rhymes? I didn't really intend for it to rhyme, and that's just my style of writing.

[AquilaVolanti]

Well, I liked it. A poem doesn't have to rhyme.