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jayyy-lmao
March 7th, 2013, 12:17 PM
Mirror.

Mirror, mirror, on the wall,
Who is the most beautiful,
Of them all?

It cannot be me, for I am tall.
It cannot be me, for I’m too small.

It cannot be me, my face is all spotty.
It cannot be me, ’cos I weigh a lot-ty.

It cannot be me, for I am too thin.
It cannot be me, for my love is a sin.

It cannot be me, with my bruised arms and face.
It cannot be me, with scars stuck in place.

So, Mirror, mirror, on the wall,
Who is the most beautiful,
Of us all?

It is all of you,
Ho matter how big or small,
You are all perfect,
And I love you all.

Any feedback is appreciated. Thanks.

Breakeven
March 7th, 2013, 12:22 PM
its pretty nice

Perfect_Insanity
March 7th, 2013, 05:22 PM
That really awesome! <3 I like it. :D

Emerald Dream
March 7th, 2013, 08:54 PM
I like that poem a lot, Jenny :)

jayyy-lmao
March 8th, 2013, 11:02 AM
Thanks guys!
Maths gets boring sometimes, and someone called me ugly so.... THIS.

Jess
March 10th, 2013, 09:13 PM
Love it! :D

Sorry that someone called you ugly. They had no right to do that.

rocketsheep
March 11th, 2013, 04:51 PM
ffff