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Totality
March 2nd, 2013, 01:36 PM
Hey all,

This is all I've written since posting my last parts. Sorry it's not much, but this is what I have.

View the first part here: http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/showthread.php?t=167375

Here we go:

Abigail didn’t know what she was doing; why was she going back to that place, to that infernal place where she had to be, she wasn’t going back home; she didn’t have a home, not any more. She simply thought that she had nowhere else to go; she didn’t have any friends, she was elusive and dangerous to be around; the night was her friend; her one and only friend.
Moonlight shone through the trees and reflected off the wet roads; Abigail was amazed at how much it had rained during the time she was gone; she looked behind her and it was dry as a bone, ahead of her it was amazing; it was like a local waterfall had just dropped on the town, it was spectacular to behold.

Jose Mendoza
March 2nd, 2013, 03:28 PM
keep up with the good job! you're great!