A poem

[jayyy-lmao]

I sit and cry beside the wall,
You just walk on by,
I stand by the wall with my head down,
You say why won't you die?

I hide the scars, the cuts, the bruises,
You say show me your arms,
I pull my sleeve up sheepishly,
You say you're one who self-harms.

I say couldn't you leave me be?
Can't you see what you've done?
I write those words down hastily,
And then pick up the gun.

Next day you're called,
Into the room,
Is I true sir?
Did he go out with a boom?

The life you took,
The life you tore,
That life you stole,
A life no more.

Any feedback is appreciated. Thanks! ;D

[WalkingOnDisaster]

Hey.
I like the poem. It lacks a little rythm in my opinion. But that's probably just me. It's really quite lovely.

[jayyy-lmao]

Thanks. It might lack rhythm, my poems dont usually rhyme

[Jess]

Loved it :)