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WalkingOnDisaster
February 16th, 2013, 11:46 PM
A hummingbird, in his cage
A butterfly with broken wings
A girl with no man to hold her
Dreams that lay desolate
Can no one see?

Workers working too hard
Fires cooking too hot
Hair falling too quickly
Dreams are nowhere
Can you hear me?

Songs not sung
Birds with no wings
Heart with no beat
Walking but going nowhere
Where could you be?

Without hope, it's so cold
Without love, it's so dry
Without tears, no more smiles
What is this world?

No majesty, no grace
Just pain and hatred
All these bad things,
And yet I stay.

The question: Why?

AuthorX303720
February 17th, 2013, 12:48 AM
I am going to cry... it was not good. IT WAS GREAT! I would suggest putting the title as Hell.

WalkingOnDisaster
February 17th, 2013, 09:10 AM
I am going to cry... it was not good. IT WAS GREAT! I would suggest putting the title as Hell.

You honestly liked it that much? I appreciate it! Hah yeah. That's actually a good title. I like it.