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Anonymous
July 13th, 2005, 06:39 PM
This is me after a hard day's work.
Looking around the room thinking what a big jerk this world can be.
Can't you see me im down on my knees.
Then i start crying.
Its starts like a cloud.
The darkness hits blocking all the happiness and brightness in the sky.
I take a deep breath
then I let my emotions flow.
Banging on the doors.
Pounding them making the thunder roar with power!
The whole room shakes.
I scream and pounce onto my bed.
The lightning has been struck.
I go to the bathroom to finish it off.
Get out the razor and cut what ever is left.
The I collapse with exhaustion.

minutes later I put on my fake face.
The clouds disappear leaving only the sun.

i_love_jesus
July 13th, 2005, 06:50 PM
i like it

TMTY
July 13th, 2005, 07:45 PM
KOOLNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! one of ur best keep it up and be sure to post in mine i made two more.

Anonymous
July 13th, 2005, 07:53 PM
Thanks! :smile:

Anonymous
July 14th, 2005, 11:05 AM
delete

Anonymous
July 14th, 2005, 05:54 PM
come on guys!!!

LoSt_n_the_WoRlD
July 14th, 2005, 07:04 PM
you triple posted,..haha jk jk i like it alot!!! good job

Oath
July 14th, 2005, 08:25 PM
That was really great.