Poem About Cutting

[jayyy-lmao]

I sat there
Looking
Just watching
Every bone in my body urging me to do something
But I had done all I could
I watched as she gripped the blade
The scalpel, sinking it deep, deep into her arm
I heard her scream
The scream of a tortured soul, of a misunderstood being,
Of a child of hell. A hell no child should ever endure
I saw the red liquid trickle from her arm
Slowly, like water dripping from a tap, it flowed
Trickling off her arm
If only
I
could
stop
her

[ackmedsgirl666]

I sat there
Looking
Just watching
Every bone in my body urging me to do something
But I had done all I could
I watched as she gripped the blade
The scalpel, sinking it deep, deep into her arm
I heard her scream
The scream of a tortured soul, of a misunderstood being,
Of a child of hell. A hell no child should ever endure
I saw the red liquid trickle from her arm
Slowly, like water dripping from a tap, it flowed
Trickling off her arm
If only
I
could
stop
her


wow this is very deep.. i can sense the emotion in this. very well written. i wish i could express my feelings like this on paper... or out loud

[jayyy-lmao]

Thanks

[Texas warrior]

The end of the poem is really good.