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autismtwin
January 25th, 2013, 12:45 AM
You say you hate my sad eyes.

But you rarely see the pain that they hide.

I’m tired of living and scared of dying.

You don’t know it, but I’m done trying.

To you I look like a girl with a smile

The truth is that it’s been fake for a while.

You don’t know how bad I feel

I have scars that may never heal

I hide everything really well

I secretly wish you could see my hell.

You like to make fun and sabotage

You don’t see, but my pain is camouflaged.

You’ll never know until it becomes your life

The sadness, pain, razor, and knife.

Don’t judge a book by its cover.

Because there’s so much you haven’t yet discovered.

jayyy-lmao
January 25th, 2013, 09:47 AM
So how i feel.

workingatperfect
January 25th, 2013, 12:14 PM
That's really good. Perfectly describes how used to feel over the last few years.

Mirage
January 25th, 2013, 07:44 PM
:arrow: TOB

Jess
January 25th, 2013, 10:39 PM
Yet another great poem! :D

Mynick
January 26th, 2013, 09:04 AM
Great poem, keep them coming.

dusman77
January 26th, 2013, 11:34 AM
Awesome poem. Brought a tear to my eye actually. I'm so sensitive xD

Texas warrior
January 28th, 2013, 09:37 AM
It has good flow, but I am no in love the the rhyming scheam.

Perfect_Insanity
February 8th, 2013, 10:01 PM
Awesomeness!!!