Trial #1

[Wonder.]

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[Erasmus]

I really really like this! Are you gonna continue it?

[ackmedslayer556]

wow sounds good. you should post more

[Wonder.]

Thank you both of you!

I don't know if I'll write any more of them. If people really want me to I might. Like i said in the original post though, I just wrote it because I was bored. I don't really have any ideas for what to do next. I might try to expand this one, it seems a little short.

[ackmedslayer556]

well hey maybe you should get bored more often lolol

[Lyra Heartstrings]

Whenever I read stories, I try to find every possible flaw with it, to help the writer.
If I were to be honest?
I couldn't find anything worth noting. Very, very good job.

[Wonder.]

Whenever I read stories, I try to find every possible flaw with it, to help the writer.
If I were to be honest?
I couldn't find anything worth noting. Very, very good job.

Thank you. :)

And just because I'm really picky, what were the/were there any small things that you found?