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jayyy-lmao
January 22nd, 2013, 12:30 PM
So my school is having a poetry competion for valentine's day.
This is my entry.

Him
His eyes sparkle like deep blue diamonds,
His skin shines like a star,
His hair flows like a river,
His lips are as red as fire.

When he walks, he stands tall,
When he talks, his silky voice flows from his lips,
When he runs, he runs like a cheetah,
When he smiles, the world smiles with him.

When you gaze into his deep eyes, you lose yourself,
When you talk to him, you find yourself entranced by his voice,
When you see him smile, you can’t help but smile back,
When you hear him laugh, you erupt into laughter with him.

He is beautiful; He is kind,
He is always on my mind.
He is caring; he’s a ray of sunshine,
And he is my valentine.

Emerald Dream
January 22nd, 2013, 08:32 PM
This is fantastic. :heart: very very beautiful!

I really hope you win with this poem.

Thank you so much for sharing your words and feelings :)

CharlieHorse
January 22nd, 2013, 09:24 PM
That's really sweet :)
I hope you win! :)

jayyy-lmao
January 23rd, 2013, 08:55 AM
Thanks for the compliments.