It's addictive

[Anonymous]

Swallow it down
It will make you feel better.
Just one more pill.
It so easy and it'll make you feel so good.
It will promise you a day of rest.
use it to its potential.
Viewer desgression advised.

Medicine

In prison with its metal cage surrounding me.
In closed spaces scare me.
Its a great time to start feeling clostrophopic.
They worned me that id be here for awhile.
I get my own special cage and own special food.
Oh, look over there is a nice little sink.
All the nice blood stains make it look so pink.
I think its time for me to reconsider what i have done.

[TMTY]

nice......thats really good poem.!!!!!!!

[LoSt_n_the_WoRlD]

wow very powerful writing. I like it

[TMTY]

YA its great Austin awesome

[Anonymous]

thanks! :smile:

[Anonymous]

hAhahahaha! sarah tells the real truth!

[serial-thrilla]

it was ok, but i know nothing about poetry

[kevin]

hmm, I think there's too much prose in it, good structure, but it's like statements instead of the exact feelings and experiences which is what poetry is about.