I wrote this for my Mom.....

[Oath]

I wrote this poem for
my caring mom:

A life well-lived is a
precious gift of hope
and strength and grace
from someone who has
made our world a
brighter, better place.

Its filled with
moments sweet and
sad, with smiles and
sometimes tears, with
friendships formed and
good times shared and
laughter though the
years.

A life well-lived is a
legacy of joy and pride
and pleasure, a loving,
lasting memory our
grateful hearts will
treasure.

[TMTY]

That is sooooo good!!! be sure to write more!!! so awesome!!!!!!!

[Oath]

Really thank you. I never though someone would say something about my poems.

[TMTY]

of course its a great poem! mine are more of songs tho

[Oath]

did you read any of my other poems (some are good and some are weird):

1. I wrote this for my mom
2. death dream
3. his plan (gods plan)
4. perfect blood stain
5. feelings poem
6. painful eyes

Im writeing a book but im not gonna post it! I wrote alot of other poems 2 but most of them are dumb..(i think)

[OldHabitsDieHard]

aww that was a really good. i wish i had a mom :(

~Sara

[Oath]

Actually Sara i dont have a Mom she died when i was 7. and i wrote that for her since she past away.

[OldHabitsDieHard]

aww, i know how you feel sort of then. its hard sometimes...

~S

[Oath]

not to be rude but what happened it you dont wanna say in "public" PM me ok

[OldHabitsDieHard]

ok i PMed you...the short version

[i_love_jesus]

loved it so much keep up the good work ok

[teencrazykid]

GOOD WORK!

[Cinimonwaffalz3]

thats really good!

[Maestro]

Holy cow! That's awesome!

You're really talented! :wink:

[teencrazykid]

I wish I could write something like that...seriously

[Peanut Butter]

i think its great and i am sorry to hear about you two's mothers

[Oath]

i took me such a long time to write it, and i kept on messin up but i finally had it perfect but nothings perfect so that doesnt make much sence.
Thanks

[nullandvoid123]

thumbs up