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Texas warrior
January 5th, 2013, 03:48 AM
Crying with the rain, all this pain is it in vain?
Why did you hurt me?
Sky why do you cry, did somebody hurt you?
Somebody hurt me too, like a bullet though and though.
Why do we cry, what should we do?
Pleas tell me, I haven't a clue what I be or say or do.
I hear her lie, it makes my cry, I want to die.
But no, thats not what I want.
I want to her to fry, I want to try, I want to fly, I don't want to die.
I want fly into the sky always live and never die.


Any comment welcome

Lost in the Echo
January 5th, 2013, 03:53 AM
Awesome. :D
Very well written poem.

ackmedsgirl666
January 5th, 2013, 04:07 AM
Sweet :)
Nice writing piece