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jayyy-lmao
December 30th, 2012, 08:36 AM
NOTE: DOSEN'T RHYME

What would you do
If you had to pick
Between to completely differnet
And amazing people.

The hotshot
Everyone loves him
JB Hair, So laid back
He's horizontal
Ask him about
His shit grades
The usual answer is
I don' care

The Brainbox
Outcast A tad chubby,
So in love with videogames He can speak Italian
just from playing the assasins creed game
Ask him about
His straight A's
The usual answer is
No biggie

The kindness of both is overwhelming, (NOT)
They have upsides and downsides.
But I love them both
HELP

Lost in the Echo
December 30th, 2012, 08:48 AM
That was pretty good. :)
I really liked it.

Jason The Great
December 30th, 2012, 10:07 AM
yeah ,cool! ;)
but it could be awesome if it was RHYME!

Mortal Coil
December 30th, 2012, 12:48 PM
I like how you just wrote it the way it is. That's the way I like poetry :) Well done, you should be proud.