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jayyy-lmao
December 24th, 2012, 02:29 PM
NOTE: It's not supposed to rhyme.

The Darkness

Standing on the edge of the abyss, I look over the edge.
The darkness consuming the light, the horror consuming the joy.
The hate consuming the love, the soul consuming the heart.
The mind and heart battling for control, fighting, screaming to be heard.
Screaming silently.
They may never see it, but I am so much more.
I am so much more than four-eyes, fat and loner.
I am the night that will consume their days.
I am the dark that will consume their light.
I am the horror that will consume their joy.
I am the guilt that will consume their tainted hearts and minds.
When they come running, I will turn away.
When they scream and plead for forgiveness, I will turn and shout,
"NO! You shall feel the pain you bore me for all my days, and it will consume you 'til the end of your nights. And then, only then, will you have my forgiveness."
Then I stepped over the edge.

Thanks for reading, never wrote a poem before.
It's all about depression and wanting to make the pain go away and wanting to make others feel your pain.

tubanic
December 27th, 2012, 07:20 AM
thats a really good, I love how dark it is :) Really sums up how I feel

jayyy-lmao
December 27th, 2012, 04:26 PM
thats a really good, I love how dark it is :) Really sums up how I feel

Thanks
I wrote it to express how i felt when i was depressed