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LetsKillTonight
December 23rd, 2012, 06:49 PM
Saved.
Fire and miss.
Bleed Again.

I inhale the deepest scent of regret.
Warmth in the cold, but not in the same way a smile is warm.
Not pleasant, not kind. Filled with the taste of hell.

Saved.
Fire and miss.
Bleed Again.

I fall again. Into the dark and into the cold.
With the hateful warmth that drips to the floor, quiet.
Much more silent than a gunshot, just as deadly.

Saved.
Fire and miss.
Bleed Again.

I am nothing, in the same way that black is not a color.
Tasting the Cold, Dark, Blankness, nothingness of who I am.
And just as I am nothing, nothing can save me again.

Fire and miss.
Bleed Again.
Save Me.

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Thanks for reading! And constructive comments are welcome! :D

The Chameleon
December 24th, 2012, 01:17 PM
That's very nice.

jayyy-lmao
December 24th, 2012, 02:20 PM
Me Likes!

tubanic
December 27th, 2012, 07:23 AM
Thats so powerful and amazing :)

Lost in the Echo
December 27th, 2012, 07:26 AM
Yeah, I liked it. Very well written poem. :)

Haunted
December 29th, 2012, 05:19 PM
Oooooooooooo I like it a lot holy crap. It was spectacular.