Finished it

[Haunted]

Ok I posted this a while back, before it was done. Now it's done. If the picture isn't good enough to read, the left has part of the lyrics from "Like You" and "Lies" by Evanescence. The right is the lyrics from "Nemo" by Nightwish. I took out the repetitions though so the chorus is at the end.

[Noirtier]

I love the bordering that you've done around the lyrics, I think that it's really wonderful. The color contrast with the words also makes them pop out, which, in this case, I think is good. Your concept is unique, at least from among the things I have seen before, and I think that it's actually very effective as a work of art. As far as the drawing of the man goes, I liked the face and head, I felt that the upper body is a little faint though. However, the robes are magnificently done, and you really did a great job, I think!

[Haunted]

I love the bordering that you've done around the lyrics, I think that it's really wonderful. The color contrast with the words also makes them pop out, which, in this case, I think is good. Your concept is unique, at least from among the things I have seen before, and I think that it's actually very effective as a work of art. As far as the drawing of the man goes, I liked the face and head, I felt that the upper body is a little faint though. However, the robes are magnificently done, and you really did a great job, I think!

Oh my gosh thank you so much!!! The lines are easier to see in person, and it's too big to scan so I had to photograph it. But I do have a tenancy to draw with faint lines so if I mess up I can erase it without leaving a mark. However, once I'm done I don't want to go back and trace my lines to make them darker because I'm afraid I'll mess up and then I'd have the same problem I was trying to avoid.

[Mortal Coil]

Whoa, dude. Chills. Those songs are a perfect fit.