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Texas warrior
December 17th, 2012, 07:34 PM
You are a black hole.................
That's just how you roll.

I trusted you and you lied to me.
So I broke up with you, and that's how it's got to be.

I will not let you pull me back in,
even if you make me happy as sin.

You try to worm your way back into my life,
and if you do you will causes strife.

Crazy is as crazy does, and you lied to me because?
You are a black hole, pulling for control.

You never admitted your lies.
but in the end I got wise.

You really cared for me, and I really cared for you.
I know how much you hate this, but I do to.

Lost in the Echo
December 17th, 2012, 07:38 PM
Damn, that's really good. :D
Your poems are always awesome.
Don't stop writing them dude, you're really good.

Uncut Joe
December 18th, 2012, 03:02 PM
I absolutely love this poem! Great rhyme scheme and great words.

Mirage
December 19th, 2012, 06:13 PM
The rhyme really pulls it together.

Keep it up, you have something special going!