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Sordid Saint
December 15th, 2012, 07:35 PM
When I wake up in the morning
With tears in my eyes
I can't help feeling
Alone

A feeling so familiar
One I know so well
All my life its never changed
Alone is all I know

And when I feel alone
I try to feel the love
So love flows through my veins
And love fills up my lungs

And when the love says its goodbyes
I start to feel a void
That makes me want to die
Cause I'm stuck here with my mind, alone
:whoops:

Noirtier
December 15th, 2012, 07:39 PM
Very nice Quinn. I like it at least. The descriptions in it I think are really well done. I find it to be relatable as well. I've felt that way many, many times. Keep writing Quinn, I look forward to reading more!

Breakeven
December 16th, 2012, 10:49 AM
aww thats nice quinn :)

Sordid Saint
December 16th, 2012, 12:44 PM
Thanks

Texas warrior
December 16th, 2012, 07:10 PM
I didn't like it that much, but thats because of the style.