!!! PEACE PLEASE !!!

[sgtpeppers]

Is this the world we created,
Is the destruction we want,
I ask myself why we kill,
I ask myself why we fight,
I see no point,
I see no grip,
We're falling and falling,
And cannot stop,
There is no hope,
Unless we all work for peace together...

so what do u think??? PLEASE REPLY

[Anonymous]

It was pretty cool. It would be better if you added more to it. it seems incomplete to me.
but otherwise it was pretty good. :smile:

[TMTY]

its good for a start keep writing and ya that should have more added on to it!!! but good job

[Oath]

good job....loved it...ya mite wanna add on

hey can you check out my poems no one ever reads them or leaves coments....:(