My Poem

[xXl0sth0peXx]

In a bed of hay he lay
That cold winter night
Inside the manger lo
In the good old country land

The cow said moo, the dove said coo
And his mother said you to cute
To her new born son
Inside the manger lo
In the good old country land

The shepherds heard their sheep
They trip on rocks and fall on grass
And they ditched their sheep to see the son
Inside the manger lo
In the good old country land

And they got to the manger
And they saw the son in danger
For the dove pecked at his face
Inside the manger lo
In the good old country land

Suck it bitches. You are all jealous of this beautiful work of art.

[Sordid Saint]

lol amazing (y)

[ImCoolBeans]

This is certainly interesting; but I honestly like it! I'm interested in seeing your other writings :3

[Texas warrior]

It is good, but it lacked story. A good poem tells a story, this one kinda did but not really.

[DerBear]

I am jealous that you can write such a good poem. Its really good :)

[Emerald Dream]

Suck it bitches. You are all jealous of this beautiful work of art.

I doubt that Mary actually said this :lol:

Seriously, I liked it. Very nice.