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TMTY
July 7th, 2005, 11:39 PM
I wish that I was blind.
From the worlds suffering and pain.
I wish that i was Blind.
Because it would help me gain.......

Stop it Stop it with the war.
I cant take it anymore.

I wish that I was blind.
From the little children crying.
I wish that I was Blind.
As they watch theyre fathers dying.

Do you see....?
Do you see....?

TMTY
July 8th, 2005, 11:30 PM
is anybody gonna post about this???

sgtpeppers
July 9th, 2005, 05:43 PM
no offense i think that u have structure but the influncence is not very strong

Anonymous
July 9th, 2005, 07:26 PM
it was a good start, i think you should have added more to it. :smile:

TMTY
July 10th, 2005, 12:50 PM
it has more thats not really even the song i didnt have the lyrics with me lol so thats y its not good that was base off of memory. lol

DouggyO.o
July 10th, 2005, 12:50 PM
yeah i agree with austin

TMTY
July 10th, 2005, 12:52 PM
it has more lol