rap/ poem idk comment what you think

[heavan14]

fuck you & fuck your ways. im done w/ all the bullshit you put me through, you wanna be done? Fine were through! now get the fuck outta my face and go find another girl to go screw over. you said you loved me but its a lie. just like your whole life, you mad bro? well i dont give a fuck...be mad all you want see if i care. you wanted me to trust you, but you took my trust and crumpled it into a ball. you want me back? well you lost your chance im the best you'll ever find. all the fights we go through? im done crying over. im done with you, you can sit there beg & cry but its not gonna work. at one point idid love you maybe i still do but i aint ever gonna come back

[WickedWeekend]

It's not a rap (No rhyming) nor a poem (there is too much cussing). I personally don't like it. But that shouldn't stop you from making more! Learn from this.

Welcome to VT btw!

[Mortal Coil]

It's not a rap (No rhyming) nor a poem (there is too much cussing)

Those aren't requirements, necessarily. While most raps do rhyme and most poems do not have quite so many swear words, they really aren't required.

It's a very emotional piece, seems like it could be polished up a little and be really good!

[West Coast Sheriff]

With some editing, it could be really good! :D