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RCT109
November 12th, 2012, 11:11 PM
here is something i would like y'all to read

it has some peices from the SCOTTISH PLAY in it
let me know what you think




Wiches
Thane of Caldor;
King of Scotland
Names that shall curse thine lips
from time hense forth.

Let it not be torn from the dominion of thine lips;
but only by a sword, drenched with CRIMSON RED
to thine mighty of a tongue and nothing more

MACBETH
Yet say it be not so,
The lips that have been granted upon my soul by the grace of the ALMIGHTY
must not be taken by no man or other.




Let me know what you think please

RCT109
November 16th, 2012, 09:53 PM
guys please give me your feedback and thoughts
im trying to turn this into a story with different names so please

West Coast Sheriff
November 16th, 2012, 10:04 PM
I like it very much!