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AkuRokuStalker
November 11th, 2012, 05:28 PM
A short poem I came up with. Reply if you know how this feels.

"Ugly," it whispers into your ear,
as it brings you into its arms.
"Liar," you whisper as you try to
resist.

It gnaws at you as it digs a hole
deep inside your skull. When you
look into the mirror what do you
see as it opens its gapeing mouth
to swallow you whole.

The shards of glass eat at your
skin, ripping you flesh from
mingling flesh. It examines you
from the inside out, leaving no
sense of beauty or wonder.

It eats you alive, mouth first.
The tears run from what is
left of your eyes filling its
stomach with glee.

"Ugly," its walls whisper.
"I am," you choke back,
the lone sound revirbirating
in your ears.

West Coast Sheriff
November 21st, 2012, 01:22 AM
I like this poem. You seem to be a really good poet.

ayelove100
November 21st, 2012, 01:31 AM
good poem

TheSocialInspector
November 21st, 2012, 02:26 AM
Your reflection is stained
It is plain
Your fingers run over
What has been left in vain

You scream but nothing comes out
You choke into its pleasures
It licks you as you stand stout
The sadism has basked in its leisure

Beauty is what is inside
What has dripped thin
Its absence laughs at your plight
As terrifying as its grin

You lie open
The foundation and the ground
What has used to be stolen
Has now been found