The cuts (?)

[Mynick]

I few weeks ago i wrote a poem very similar to this (i posted here xd) since then i improve it. Not sure about the title.
Opinions please

I detest your sanity
you're blinded be the light
Empty eyes of suffering
Get out of my life

Religion of the forsaken minds
For they shall we bleed
Can't quit this addiction
Who could ever foresee

A fake smile crosses my lips
Ever lasting cuts on my wrists
The scars to remind me that is real
All the happiness was steal

[Breakeven]

this is really nice i love it :D

[Mynick]

this is really nice i love it :D
Thanks xd