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LetsKillTonight
October 31st, 2012, 11:16 PM
Some of my most recent water color art... Thoughts?


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TheWaterPrince
November 1st, 2012, 08:01 PM
Nice I LOVE the second one! :D

Noirtier
November 1st, 2012, 09:13 PM
I really love the first one, I think that the way you crafted it was really spectacular. The added affect surrounding and underneath the eyes highlights the purpose and message of the piece very well, I think. The second one is a little different. I think it's very well drawn out, but it almost doesn't even look like watercolor--whether that's good or bad is up to you to decide. And the final one adds a nice air of playfulness to the whole set. All in all, a very good job! I look forward to seeing more! :)

Allanon
November 4th, 2012, 06:53 PM
they are pretty cool

Sudds3
November 5th, 2012, 12:39 AM
I really enjoy looking at the first, it's so simplistic yet complex at the same time! You should, try delving into more artwork like that and see what you come up with, and then post it here so I can see it! You have a serious talent here and you cannot let it go to waste, so waste paper and supplies and do what you enjoy. Maybe try changing the color palette around to grays or to blues maybe? Trying things like an eerie and crooked forest of trees dissolving into the paper...maybe? Hahaha probably not but ok! Love them and keep up the amazing work

LetsKillTonight
November 5th, 2012, 09:15 AM
I really enjoy looking at the first, it's so simplistic yet complex at the same time! You should, try delving into more artwork like that and see what you come up with, and then post it here so I can see it! You have a serious talent here and you cannot let it go to waste, so waste paper and supplies and do what you enjoy. Maybe try changing the color palette around to grays or to blues maybe? Trying things like an eerie and crooked forest of trees dissolving into the paper...maybe? Hahaha probably not but ok! Love them and keep up the amazing work

Thank you for the ideas! the first one is definitely my favorite style and I would love to try channeling that style a bit more! :)

Terrell613091
November 12th, 2012, 12:37 AM
Love the first two

West Coast Sheriff
November 12th, 2012, 12:43 AM
They're nice. I really like them.

xCrystalx
November 13th, 2012, 06:18 PM
Nice, Don't be afraid to put darker colors on though. I've had a really hard time putting darker accents into my drawing but when I do it gives the drawing much more depth. it's pretty good art for being a teenager :D

Vonnie
November 18th, 2012, 07:19 AM
Really nice work!

West Coast Sheriff
November 21st, 2012, 01:25 AM
I lik them, especially the bottom two.

ayelove100
November 21st, 2012, 01:29 AM
very great, love the second :)

FergusDunn
November 29th, 2012, 04:07 AM
I like the first one - the eyes

inda looks like a body behnd them - lungs maybe

so to me - just my opinion its like the body - the soul looking out.

the eyes are the window to the soul - sort of reversed

They are all good -

darkie
December 2nd, 2012, 05:34 PM
Oh goodness they're really very nice! The first one reminds me of a little painting I've done myself, I think those bleeding/mascara dripping eyes is a common thing to paint in watercolor. Also, the second one looks really cool and the last one is pretty cute. :)

Loreley
December 4th, 2012, 07:07 AM
Very nice! Especially the first one!:)

Caver
December 5th, 2012, 03:48 PM
I love them! They're so cute and original.

nutjob
December 8th, 2012, 02:20 PM
The first one is amazing, those eyes are perfect. The second and third one are great as well. :D

The joker.
December 8th, 2012, 03:36 PM
Meh lets be lil weird again :D, i love your signature! -its awesome, nice drawings too :D

Skyline
December 12th, 2012, 07:31 PM
I LOVE the 3rd one it reminds me of Alice in Wonderland.

Korab
December 15th, 2012, 05:03 PM
Pertty cool the first one is the best in my opinion!