Critique my Photo's?

[LetsKillTonight]

Some Photo's from a photo shoot I did with my 2 year old niece, Audrianna. :) Any constructive critiqhttp or comments?


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[Allanon]

cool pics

[The Madman]

A few are a little too over-exposed. Perhaps shutting down the aperture ever so slightly would help, it would also crispen the image and make it more in focus.

However I do them, the black and white is a nice touch as well.

I just hope you didn't steal the child :D

[UnknownError]

These are great, really nice. I liked the 2nd one especially. :)

[SamB]

I Like the majority of them :) I love the first one, bit over exposed, but it give it the vintage feel which i guess you were going for? The 5th one I like but what would make it a million times better would be if there wasn't the leaf in fronts of the girls face, it is quite distracting and takes away from the main focus of the image.

But overall really great pictures :)

[Breakeven]

pretty nice :D

[Mortal Coil]

I guess I'm a minority here but I don't think the first one is overexposed. It's a strong contrast, certainly, but that's the point (I think.) It's both adorable and striking. They're all great, though I prefer the b&w ones to the color photo. Black and white is just... it's nostalgic, I guess.

[Jess]

Love them all. really cute too :D

[CaliKiDD]

Photoshop Photoshop Photoshop! It'll be your best friend if you actually want to become a photographer. BTW black and white doesn't do justice for these pictures. Aside from some technical errors these photos had the potential to be fantastic.

[Elysium]

I really love the first one!

[LouBerry]

I love them, the black and white makes them even better.

[Bri-Bri]

great photography! she is such a cutie!
wish i could get my photos to turn out that good!

[Steve Jobs]

Hmm.. I like the monochrome look going on there - but if you're going to shoot black & white, I'd like to see black and white - not a big gray image!

[ECSTASY]

nice one :D but the 2nd one is the best ;) :) :D

[Cognizant]

Hmm.. I like the monochrome look going on there - but if you're going to shoot black & white, I'd like to see black and white - not a big gray image!

A.K.A add more contrast? :P

I agree, I loove the black and white, but some more contrast would really help make the photo "pop."

[Steve Jobs]

A.K.A add more contrast? :P

I agree, I loove the black and white, but some more contrast would really help make the photo "pop."

The idea isn't to make the image pop. Too much contrast is the sign of an instagramateur :P

It's all in perception of depth, light and darkness, separation of layers in creating a three-dimensional environment. Using luminosity to help tell the story.

[Cognizant]

The idea isn't to make the image pop. Too much contrast is the sign of an instagramateur :P

It's all in perception of depth, light and darkness, separation of layers in creating a three-dimensional environment. Using luminosity to help tell the story.

Oh, yeah, definitely a valid point.

[Texas warrior]

I don't see anything wrong with them. I don't think that with in reason you could done better.