Rage

[Texas warrior]

I feel my body quake.
I feel my anger wake.

I feel my anger burn,
for this world I scorn.

I lash out with all my rage,
Because I feel like I'm in a cage.............

The wounds to my soul run deep,
Because my inner beast wouldn't Sleep.

And now I burn in hell,
But still no one can tell.


Any comment welcome.

[Allanon]

Sounds pretty good, but why so death and despair?:):what:

[Mirage]

Love the rhyming scheme.
But seriously, why so much death?

[Texas warrior]

Love the rhyming scheme.
But seriously, why so much death?

Sounds pretty good, but why so death and despair?:):what:


Hummmmm............. It was just sorta how I felt at the time.

[Pierce]

Love it man. Seriously it's great. Especially the 4th stanza.

[xXoblivionXx]

it's really good, a little dark, but good

[Tiggz]

It amazing tje death and desparity of it add to the power it has because its the defined feelings of it and you can clearly tell it.