"Painful Eyes"

[Oath]

People started stairing
It worse then the suns glairing

If they could see right though these eyes.
Most of them would crash down and die.

For pain has left a mark on me.
So just go home and left me be!

[Anonymous]

"If they could see right through these eyes.
Most of them would crash down and die."

I really like that part! you have a way with words.

[Oath]

Thanks

[kolte]

Its ok. I think you should try and elaborate on it. But none the less i do like it

[Oath]

Its ok. I think you should try and elaborate on it

What do you think i could do with it?