Breakout poem '07.

[Mannequin]

Inside ourselves
our thoughts compose
our brain reacts,
our words expose.

We tear through feelings
finding our peace
we look so far in
to get such little release.

Our looks adjacent
to others stares
we might as well face them
because no one else cares.

Outside ourselves
alleged attacks race
we have nothing to grab
despair gone without trace.

[Serenity]

I like it- it has a very good rhythm.

[Mannequin]

im gonna bump this b/c this is prob the last poem ill write. lol

[Whisper]

I think its great as always
I'm serious Austin
hun you got skillz


and why would it be your last

[Underground_Network]

Wow, thats a great poem, you definitely shouldn't stop writing. You're a great poet. :D