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kolte
July 5th, 2005, 02:13 AM
I look to the right
the pressure builds
I scan the left
they are comming
I clench my fists
they draw closer
I make my move
There almost at me
I run
I cross the street

DouggyO.o
July 5th, 2005, 07:12 AM
its ok, needs some work but its still good

kolte
July 5th, 2005, 06:13 PM
its ment to be funny

Oath
July 5th, 2005, 09:00 PM
Yea its ok...funny wise.

kolte
July 5th, 2005, 09:46 PM
meh,