Ancient lies

[Mynick]

So i wrote this poem when i was on a really bad day. An opinion would be great.

I detest your sanity
You're blinded by the light
Empty eyes of suffering
Get out of my life
Cursed are the lambs of god
For they shall be bled
Whiter than the whitest snow
Ancient lies, only regrets
Religion of the lowest minds
For they shall be slain
All mayhem, ancient lies

[justinglives]

Wonderful!
For real, tht was gr8!

[West Coast Sheriff]

Damn that's a great poem. ! Keep up the gret writing. :D

[Breakeven]

thats really good :3

[Mynick]

Wonderful!
For real, tht was gr8!
Thank you! :whoops:

Damn that's a great poem. ! Keep up the gret writing. :D
Thanks, i will write some more this week.

thats really good :3
Thanks :)

[Jess]

great poem!! :)

[Texas warrior]

I did not like it, it didn't flow right.

[Mynick]

great poem!! :)
Thanks

I did not like it, it didn't flow right.
Np, can't please all :P