Pull the Trigger

[amibi12]

Have you ever felt
The cold steel upon your head?
How would that make you feel,
just one squeeze and you're dead?

I sit here so ready
To pull the trigger

5...4....3....2...1.
BANG!!!
It hurts.. It's.. Cold..
Dark...


i must say, this is my favorite poem of my own.

Please don't double post. Edit your previous post instead. -Gigablue

[Breakeven]

its nice!!

[amibi12]

thank you! ^-^

[Jess]

nice poem :)

[West Coast Sheriff]

Nice poem :D congrats
Keep up the gret writings

[Texas warrior]

It's pritty dam brutal, but good.