poem!

[Breakeven]

If i can take it all back
If i can just take the pain away
How nice would that be ?
Oh what i would do to change things
To go back in time?
To not be seen?
To be normal?
To be me?

How hard could it be?
To wanting to breathe?

Tell me who am i?
I will tell you how you want to feel?
To feel loved?
To feel wanted?
To feel good enough?
And what world is this?

Show me your scars
I will kiss the pain away
Make your scars fade
Make you smile again
Like you never felt pain
Like you're a kid again

[West Coast Sheriff]

It's a great poem. I absolutely love it.

[Mortal Coil]

Love this,
except it's breathe*, not breath ;)
(for what it's worth, lots of native speakers mess that up too, and I'm just a grammar nazi)

[Abyssal Echo]

If i can take it all back
If i can just take the pain away
How nice would that be ?
Oh what i would do to change things
To go back in time?
To not be seen?
To be normal?
To be me?

How hard could it be?
To wanting to breath?

Tell me who am i?
I will tell you how you want to feel?
To feel loved?
To feel wanted?
To feel good enough?
And what world is this?

Show me your scars
I will kiss the pain away
Make your scars fade
Make you smile again
Like you never felt pain
Like you're a kid again

Very NICE Viv :P

[Breakeven]

thanks guys :P

[West Coast Sheriff]

A again must I say, this is my favorite poem.:D

[Desuetude]

Love you so much Vivey, I love this poem as well. It's so beautiful.