High School

[Serenity]

Hallways packed with students
Classrooms full of thought
Walls covered in posters
Glass cases packed with art
Instrumentalists making music
Vocalists singing loud
Intellectuals studying hard
Athletes wearing jersies proud
Freshmen tense and nervous
Seniors relieved and at ease
One girl in the midst of it all
Secretly jealous but publically free.

[Bobby]

Awesome, and true.

[Serenity]

Thanks :daisy:

I had an enormous struggle with the last word...'at ease' was originally 'overjoyed' but I couldn't make it work, and then I still had trouble after I changed it..

[Sage]

In my opinion, it would sound better if you replaced 'instrumentalists' with 'musicians'. Other than that its wonderful. : )

[Serenity]

I was going to, but vocalists are also musicians and I wanted the contrast :daisy:
Plus 'Musicians making music' is just repetitive