Log in

View Full Version : Song of faith?


ReasonsForWeeping
September 22nd, 2012, 10:01 AM
A voice inside me cries, but for pleasure
Or for pain.
A nightmare in disguise,
who taunts me with your name.
I hear thunder coming closer,
with each beat that my heart makes.
The temptation to hold her, is so strong,
That I break.

I'm not helpless, but I'm spinning.
Am I losing me?

What we do when heavens rain,
Things that God cannot explain.
Thunder roars in the skies above,
and these just things I can't ignore.
While the clouds bleed 'til I'm stained.
Things that God cannot explain.
How you bruise me with a kiss,
While I dangle and I twist.

I've crossed another line,
Is it wrong to feel this way?
But I've left it all behind, beyond the boundaries of my faith.
I was told, but I don't know.
Is it natural or a sin?
As your body comes in closer, I hold back,Then I give in.

I'm not helpless, but I'm spinning.
Am I losing me?

What we do when heavens rain,
Things that God cannot explain.
Thunder roars in the skies above,
and these just things I can't ignore.
While the clouds bleed 'til I'm stained.
Things that God cannot explain.
How you bruise me with a kiss,
While I dangle and I twist.

When the rain dissapears,
will it wash away my fears?
Or have you stained me with your kiss?
Just a scar left on my wrist?

What we do when heavens rain,
Things that God cannot explain.
Thunder roars in the skies above,
and these just things I can't ignore.
While the clouds bleed 'til I'm stained.
Things that God cannot explain.
How you bruise me with a kiss,
While I dangle and I twist.

Noirtier
September 22nd, 2012, 05:20 PM
I like the lyrics and the theme of the song, I think they fit very well together. The story the song tells--if I'm interpreting it correctly--is something that can be very relevant in today's society, and I think you did a really good job! The repetition of "Things that God cannot explain" though I think could be cut back a bit, but then again that's me reading it, without the song set to music. So, overall, I think it was really good!