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Breakeven
September 19th, 2012, 12:00 PM
So me and ian (http://www.virtualteen.org/forums/member.php?u=19260) wrote this song together :


you sucked out my soul
threw my body around
killed my whole family
burned my home to the ground and then you walked away without saying a thing

you're knife and my back
look at me now
see my scars
baby do you know how you made me feel?

and all that pain i feel i wish it wasn't real
you walked away without a goodbye
maybe you were just a bad break or maybe its a lie
the blood and the pain all of that and my heartache
baby let it go

you're knife and my back
look at me now
see my scars
baby do you know how you made me feel?

i was all yours and you threw me away without a single care
i'm all alone with my thoughts and my soul
nothing feels real even you're music disperses
put a bullet in my brain because i'm going insane

But now it's all over they're all on my side
You feel like,suicide?
I think you should

xXoblivionXx
September 19th, 2012, 03:55 PM
this is really good :)

Mortal Coil
September 19th, 2012, 09:12 PM
oh em gee
this is just so lovely.
How is it that you're better at writing than I am, when English is my native language and neither of yours? FML (O.\\\)

Jimmy Page
September 20th, 2012, 02:04 PM
GOOOOOOO TEAMWORK!!!! :kitty:

DarkHorse4eva
September 21st, 2012, 11:13 AM
nice song

Iron Man
September 21st, 2012, 11:15 AM
Ermahgerd. Pretty good

Breakeven
September 24th, 2012, 05:17 PM
thanks ^_^

Gandalf
September 24th, 2012, 06:06 PM
Wonderful, having seen already had the sneak peek I just wish this had an actual backing tune :P

Any more singles in the waterworks?



Well done "Vianvy" (see the pun? :P )

Mob Boss
September 25th, 2012, 01:17 AM
Good job, goobs. :3 It's really good. :yes:

Breakeven
September 25th, 2012, 04:01 AM
thanks :D