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Breakeven
September 6th, 2012, 01:30 PM
here we go

scar one
you still remember everything

scar two
you still feel the same

scar three
you are not good enough

scar four
you are weak

scar five
you are not who you wanted to be

scar six
you should've said no

scar seven
people words and actions

scar eight
you just wanted an exit

scar nine
you didn't feel pretty enough

scar ten
you felt lonely and left out

scar eleven
the pain was just too much you couldn't handle it

scar twelve
you just wanted to be seen

scar thirteen
you got heart broken


scar fourteen
you become numb


scar fifteen
your wake up call

same story different person
same pain different way
we are all the same
scars dont last ,scars heals and so is your pain it wont last!

Jupiter
September 6th, 2012, 03:04 PM
oh wow viv. that was really pretty.

xXJust Jump ItXx
September 6th, 2012, 08:09 PM
Thats really true... I like it though. :)

West Coast Sheriff
September 6th, 2012, 08:10 PM
Pretty!
But kinda sad

Breakeven
September 7th, 2012, 03:47 AM
thanks guys! :)

xXoblivionXx
September 7th, 2012, 06:06 AM
Good job viv :)

xDarkAngelx
September 7th, 2012, 05:10 PM
Wow, great job Viv!

Desuetude
September 7th, 2012, 05:11 PM
This is really good Vivey <3 Write some more :)

Breakeven
September 8th, 2012, 04:00 AM
mhmm thanks :D

NotAvailable
September 10th, 2012, 03:00 PM
here we go

scar one
you still remember everything

scar two
you still feel the same


scar eleven
the pain was just too much you couldn't handle it


scar thirteen
you got heart broken



same story different person
same pain different way
we are all the same
scars dont last ,scars heals and so is your pain it wont last!




I loved it Viv , specially the quoted ones .

Impressive as always , Thumbs up

Breakeven
September 10th, 2012, 03:25 PM
I loved it Viv , specially the quoted ones .

Impressive as always , Thumbs up

thanks adam :yeah: